What if Chor Lau Heung didn’t defeat the Bat Prince
during the last duel? What if he fell into the cliff instead, presumably dead?
What would Siu Ching do? The New Adventures of Chor Lau Heung 1984 is the
property of Gu Long and TVB Hong Kong, no copyright infringement intended.
Dedicated to the ever charming Michael Miu and Barbara Yung. Click this to read this fan-fiction at my
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Yuen Tsui Wan (Simon Yam) vs Chor Lau Heung (Michael Miu), ep 40 |
The Return of the Bat Prince
Princess Wing Ching strode along the corridor towards Emperor Father's
chamber; her faithful Jade Sword in her left hand. It was past midnight
already, and most likely her father was already asleep. She didn't need to talk
to him, though. She just needed to make sure he was alright. She arrived at the
door, whispered to the guards not to announce herself for fear of waking His
Majesty up, and slowly opened the door.
Wu Tit Fa and Master Yuen Hung were there accompanying the Crown
Prince outside the main chamber. Upon registering her presence, the three men
frowned. The Crown Prince spoke first.
"Sister, I thought we agreed that you were going to have a
proper sleep tonight instead of patrolling." Informally known as Yip Shing
Lan, the Crown Prince glanced at the Princess' attire, which was a far cry from
her usual regal robes. These days Princess Wing Ching aka Song Siu
Ching had taken a fancy at practical fighting clothes than feminine clothings.
Not taken a fancy really. More of a necessity from her point of view.
"I can't sleep," was her reply as she sat down next to
her half brother and placed her sword on the table. "Besides, it's what
Chor tai-gor would do...so I'm merely following his examples."
The room was quiet anyway before she came, but this time the
silence that descended was a different one. Master Yuen Hung shook his head and
sighed. "Princess..." He started, but she raised her hand.
"I'm fine, Master Yuen Hung. I just want to make sure that
Father is okay."
"We promised to let you know if anything happens, Princess.
We have the system set up for that. Most likely you'll hear it from your
chamber anyway if a fight breaks here." The Wutang leader rose from his
chair and gently indicated the exit. "Let me escort you back to your
quarters." He then walked without waiting for the Princess' reply. After a
moment of hesitance, she took her sword and followed the Master back to her
quarters. Her new quarters, because she had moved there a few weeks ago to be
closer to her father and half-brother.
Less than five minutes later, she regretted having Master Yuen
Hung escorting her. The wise Master did so not because of her safety, but
because of something else.
"Princess..." The elder started, and immediately she
knew what he wanted to say. "You need to let him go." They stopped,
the Princess turned away to hide her face. "He's not coming back..."
"Master, stop it please."
"We've searched the entire valley and the whole river
catchment for weeks now with the help of the Beggar Clan and other friends, not
to mention the Imperial Army. You are well aware that we found a piece of his
cape down the river. The only reason we haven't found his body is likely
because the river had washed him away to the sea..."
"Stop it..."
"Wouldn't he return to you, to us, had he survived the
fall?" The elder gently prodded again.
"Master Yuen Hung..."
"You need to move on..."
"Master, stop it!!" Siu Ching snapped. She turned back
to face the Wutang master with tears streaming down her cheeks.
Hyperventilating and shaking, she repeated her request, pitifully this time.
"Stop it..."
The Wutang Master already expected this reaction, hence he took no
offence when Siu Ching snapped. Yet he had to say it. He had to tell her that,
the subject they all have been side-stepping so far since Chor Lau Heung's
disappearance. Since that fateful day when he went to the valley to meet Yuen
Tsui Wan's duel challenge. Siu Ching et al had arrived at the valley only to
find a gravely wounded Bat Prince laughing like a mad man as he looked down
into the cliff. From Wu Tit Fa, Master Yuen later learned that Yuen Tsui Wan
had, in a deranged manner, informed them all that he had kicked Chor Lau Heung
off the cliff, so he won the duel. Shock was the only thing preventing Wu, the
three ladies and Siu Ching from battling Tsui Wan on the spot, hence the Bat
Prince took the chance to jump away from the valley, leaving behind a chilling
laughter and a promise he'd be back for the throne and the Princess. For he had
killed Chor Lau Heung, and he needed to claim his prize.
Ever since, the Emperor has commanded searching for Chor Lau Heung
as a top priority. The country couldn't afford losing the King of Thieves. As
for the Princess, she went numb for days. She couldn't even shed tears for a week.
She kept repeating to herself that Chor tai-gor was still alive, that he
wouldn't leave her alone. That she'd felt it had he died. Only entering the
second week, after listening to Drunkard Wu getting drunk and reminiscing on
his old pal Chor, only then something broke within Siu Ching. She ran back to
her room (the Warriors had the habit of gathering in the Palace these days to
protect the Royal family and to console themselves on their loss), closed the
door and wept for hours. She didn't emerge for dinner or breakfast, and only in
the following afternoon, on the persistence of the Crown Prince and his wife,
only she let them in. She ate two spoonful of meals, felt like throwing up, and
cried again.
Siu Ching's grief had alerted her friends and family. Despite her
own grief, So Yung Yung took it to herself to ensure that the Princess wouldn't
do anything stupid. She took up the closest quarters to the Princess' chamber to
ensure Chor Lau Heung's love was at least still alive in the morning. Yung Yung
had long resigned to the fact that her adopted brother loved Siu Ching, and she
had actually been a silent supporter of the couple. She wouldn't want Chor
tai-gor to rebuke her from Heaven for not tending to his lover.
Yet, three days later, the Princess emerged from her chamber with
an eerie calmness on her face. It was early morning, and Yung Yung was going to
check on Siu Ching. To her utter surprise, she found the Princess outside her
own chamber in a practical fighting suit. Chor tai-gor's lover turned to
welcome Yung Yung and stated that they needed to beef up the Palace security,
for Yuen Tsui Wan would definitely return, and Chor tai-gor wouldn't let him
take over the throne. She then called up a meeting with the generals and
invited Wu Tit Fa and the three girls to join the meeting. At the end of the
short but very intensive meeting, Wu Tit Fa departed to Hua Shan to request
assistance from Master Dik Chan (formerly Koh A Lam) and Wah Jan Jan. Yung Yung
went to Mt Wutang and returned with Master Yuen Hung and some of his disciples.
Sit Yan sent a letter to her father, and in two days Sit Yi Yan and Sit Siu Yan
arrived at the Palace. The heroes agreed to conduct a roster patrol 24/7,
and they also discussed what would the best course of action be had Yuen Tsui
Wan failed to show up in the next four weeks, since they couldn't have all the
wuxia masters safeguarding the Palace all the time anyway.
During the next few days, Siu Ching morphed into an almost-perfect replica of Chor Lau Heung. She supervised the patrol, making sure that all weak
points were well-covered. She asked her generals to send spies to warn them if
someone like Yuen Tsui Wan emerged in town ("Pay particular attention to
men with large straw hats!"). She asked Master Dik Chan to be her sparring
partner during the daylight, and she wouldn't sleep until well after midnight
after ensuring the patrol was properly done. She frequently consulted her
friends on the contingency plan should the Bat Prince not returning within the
deadline. She grew thinner and more pale, yet her friends and family never saw
her more resolute than this. They admired this version of Siu Ching, but they
also longed for the old version to return. Most likely though, that Siu Ching
had died the moment Chor Lau Heung fell off the cliff...
In a flash, Master Yuen Hung pondered about all these.
"Princess..." He continued gently. "Do you think Chor tai-hap
will be happy to see you like this?"
"I'm merely doing what he'd do if he was here."
"Yet he would do it with a smile, Princess..." the
Wutang Master replied kindly. "Almost always with a smile..."
Siu Ching blinked upon hearing those words. Smile? She had
forgotten how to smile. How to laugh. Her whole world collapsed after learning
that Chor tai-gor fell off the cliff, and the only way to stay sane was to keep
busying herself with fortification plans and training hard during the daytime.
Then the dam broke again. She choked and sobbed, before breaking down on her
knees and wailed. Master Yuen Hung was relieved to see her tears, for she had
withdrawn to an unhealthy habit of cocooning herself with the busy patrol plan
etc. True, she did that to protect her father, yet she also did that as an
escape from the pain in her heart. Yet, the Master was an old man after all,
who could be helpless in handling a crying woman. Hence he was relieved to see
So Yung Yung and Wah Jan Jan emerging from the nearest quarters. He gently
handed the sobbing Princess to the two ladies and returned to the Emperor's
chamber.
The girls, meanwhile, took Siu Ching to her quarters and let her
wail there. In between tears, she told them how much she missed Chor tai-gor,
how painful it was to live the days without him. The girls blinked and, instead
of consoling the Princess, cried with her instead. They understood the pain too
well, for they too loved Chor Lau Heung with all their hearts.
"Oh for fuck sake, could you girls just shut up?!"
That cold, cruel voice did stop their tears. The girls looked up
to the ceilings to where the voice came from. To their utter surprise, Yuen
Tsui Wan was perching on the balusters, smirking at them, the Viper Sword in
his right hand.
"YOU!!!" Siu Ching's sorrow evaporated within seconds,
replaced by her anger. "How dare you show up!!"
"Well, I have promised I would, my darling, to claim you as
my prize! Do you think I will miss the chance to have you once and for
all?" Madness and pure desire mixed in Yuen Tsui Wan's eyes, causing his
handsome face to look deranged. He had, after all, desired Siu Ching since he
first laid his eyes on her, since he saw her in the Peace Mansion with Chor Lau
Heung next to her. "Don't you miss me?"
"Missing you is the first thing that I'd never do!" The
Princess snapped. "Besides, you have Kam Ling Chi with you already! Why
don't you just go with her and vanish??"
"Ling Chi?" Tsui Wan snorted. "That boring
nuisance? I killed her a few days ago after she nursed me back to health.
Couldn't stand her constant nagging of asking me to go with her to whatever
that famous island of hers!" He smirked as he registered surprise on the
girls' faces. "Come on, Princess, don't tell me you're not happy to see me
being free again to court you?"
"Happy?! I'll be happy to slash your throat!" With that,
Siu Ching leapt high and slashed her sword at the intruder. A few months ago,
Tsui Wan would have defeated her easily. Yet, weeks of training with Dik Chan
and the others have improved her skills. She dodged Tsui Wan's Viper Sword
counterattacks, back flipped and, while letting Yung Yung and Jan Jan having a
go at the Bat Prince, grabbed a yellow tube installed on her wall and ran
outside. She pulled the tube lid off and threw it on the ground. A yellow flare
burst from the tube. Soon, the other fighters would come to help.
"Ah, being prepared for my homecoming, have we?" Tsui
Wan commented as he blocked Yung Yung's roundhouse
kick. "Well, that reminds me that I had been stupid. I should go to the
obvious first, then I will take care of you, my dear bride!" With that, he
leapt outside the room and vanished.
Blood drained from Siu Ching's face as she realised what it meant.
She exchanged glances for a few seconds with Yung Yung and Jan Jan before the
latter grabbed a red tube from the wall, pulled the lid off and threw it on the
ground too. The red flare bursting from the tube told the whole Palace that the
Emperor and/or the Crown Prince was in danger. Siu Ching came up with the two
flares system. She correctly deducted that Yuen Tsui Wan would lethally target
the Emperor and/or her brother to get the throne; hence the red flare for red
alert. She knew he wouldn't kill her, for she was well aware that he desired
her, hence the yellow flare for herself. The girls then wasted no time to run
towards the Emperor's chamber. They knew that their colleagues would stop
coming to their quarters now upon detecting the red flare.
True to the drill, upon arriving at the Royal chamber, they found
Wu Tit Fa and Master Yuen Hung duelling the Bat Prince. Master Dik Chan, Sung
Tim Yi and Li Hung Chao ran into the hall followed by the Sit Brothers. Soon
chaos ensued. Tim Yi and Hung Chao sprung to escort the Emperor and the Crown
Prince away from the sleeping hall while Tsui Wan was busy blocking attacks.
The girls knew they could have used a secret passage underneath the bed, but
the crowded secret getaway would actually benefit Tsui Wan more. Sit Siu Yan
assisted the girls by grabbing the Emperor and whirled him away into the
courtyard; the Crown Prince and his wife followed suit. Another secret passage
was available just around the corner, but Tsui Wan shouldn't see them running
there. Alas, they didn't have such luxury, so they just had to protect the
Emperor and the Crown Prince in the open space.
And they might just be able to do so. Surrounded by many masters,
Yuen Tsui Wan did find it difficult to have the upper hand. He battled Sit Yi
Yan, Master Hung, Master Dik Chan and Wu Tit Fa at the same time. Yet, just
when the warriors thought they'd win the fight, Tsui Wan delivered a lethal
blow at Drunkard Wu's chest. The latter's speed to slightly turn his body was
the reason he was still alive, albeit coughing blood. Tsui Wan then kicked Dik
Chan so hard that her body whirled a few meters away and landed so hard, such
that she couldn't breathe for a second and had to be rescued by Jan Jan from
the ensuing slash of the Viper Sword. Tsui Wan finished the round by blocking
Sit Yi Yan's Palm attacks, whirled himself behind Master Yuen Hung such that
the Master became a temporary human shield between him and Sit Yi Yan, and
delivered a blow on Yuen Hung's back that caused him to stagger forward, almost
clashing with Sit Yi Yan. Tsui Wan then used those precious few seconds to leap
away from the chamber area and chased the Emperor.
He found the Ruler in the Royal meeting hall, surrounded by many
weaponed soldiers and archers. Yuen Tsui Wan scoffed, for those weapons meant
nothing to him. There was only one person who could stop him, and that person
was already either at the bottom of the valley or under the sea, dead. Pretty
much dead.
"Really Princess," he smirked as he registered Siu Ching
wielding her sword in front of her father and brother. "You think you can
stop me with this army of yours? There's only one person who can stop me, and
he's now dead!!" Tsui Wan said the last word like spitting a bitter seed
out of his mouth. He also said that to make Siu Ching sad, for he'd seen her
wailing for Chor Lau Heung just now.
Yet, the Princess didn't even blink. She knew this moment would
arrive, and she and Yung Yung et al had promised to defend the country and the
throne with all their lives. Chor tai-gor would have been proud. She smiled.
"Chor Lau Heung taught us well, you bastard! And tonight you'll get the
taste of it." She lifted her right hand. Archers around her stretched
their bows. She lowered her hand quickly, screaming, "Attack!!" and
hundreds of arrows flew towards the Bat Prince.
It was the testament of Yuen Tsui Wan's skills that none of the
arrows managed to even graze his skin. He somersaulted and back flipped here
and there and used the Viper Sword to parry the arrows. True to Siu Ching's
concern, the archers soon run out of arrows. They needed time to recharge. She
glanced at one of the generals standing beside her. The general nodded and
issued order. "Change rank and recharge!" Immediately, the archers
gave way to sword-yielding fighters, who immediately charged Tsui Wan. Master
Yuen Hung and Sit Yi Yan entered the hall and assisted the fight. Meanwhile Siu
Ching et al stealthily walked their ways out of the hall into the open space.
There were more archers waiting outside, and it should be safer for a fight.
Tsui Wan saw this and secretly admired that girl's tenacity. He desired her
even more because of that. However, he was heavily surrounded by soldiers and
warriors. Realising the gravity of his situation, Tsui Wan dodged some attacks,
grabbed a soldier as a human shield, then leapt high. He perched on the hall's
ceiling, then somersaulted outside the hall towards the Emperor.
He found a momentary opening in the protection circle around the
Crown Prince, so he leapt towards him and almost got his neck when Siu Ching
leapt between them. "Don't you hurt my brother!" She blocked his
Viper Sword attack with her Jade Sword and continued attacking the intruder.
The man who killed her lover.
Since showing up inside the Princess' chamber tonight, this was
the first full fight Tsui Wan experienced with the girl. He knew he could
defeat her, but he nevertheless again admired the girl's persistence. He'd
needed just 1-2 stances in the past to defeat her, but now she managed to hold
her ground. Such was her defence that she actually managed to annoy him. In a
flash, his deranged mind decided that it wouldn't hurt him too much to hurt
her. Even if she was handicapped during the fight, he'd still accept her, for
such was his desire towards her.
With that new plan, Yuen Tsui Wan parried Siu Ching's sword attack
and delivered a kick that she whirled backwards. He then leapt and swung the
sword hilt to hit her. He deliberately used the hilt to disarm her without
killing her, for the Viper Sword was the most venomous weapon at that time.
Yet, to his utter surprise, the sword was blocked and his chest
received a very hard kick that threw him backwards. Alarmed, he recovered and
back flipped several times to give himself a space. In front of him, shielding
Siu Ching from his attack, stood a black-clad man. Although
the man wore a black scarf, the man's tall height and demeanour were an instant
giveaway to his identity, such that Tsui Wan felt like he was having a
nightmare.
Siu Ching also realised the identity of her saviour. She blinked,
then staggering backwards. "Chor tai-gor..." She whispered to herself
and almost tripped to the ground. Alarmed, the masked man caught her and, after
quickly removing his scarf, asked with the utmost concern, "Siu Ching! Siu
Ching, are you okay?!"
She nodded and shook her head simultaneously. Then she choked on
her tears. Her Chor Lau Heung was back! He was holding her body now so close to
his own as he drilled into her eyes with love and concern. A scar now adorned
his left cheek, but the scar didn't make him look crippled. Instead, it added
to his general appeal.
So many questions whirling into her mind now. Yet, before she
could even utter a word, her Chor Lau Heung smiled and gently said, "I'd
love to stay for a chat, but we know that I have a business to finish. Now, may
I borrow your sword?" He then took her Jade Sword from her and firmly yet
gently ushered her to the Crown Prince, who was also still agog to see the King
of Thieves returning to life. The Lingering Fragrance then turned to face the
also flabbergasted Emperor.
"Your Highness, permission to face Yuen Tsui Wan myself
without anyone's assistance." Upon receiving the slow nod from the
Emperor, Chor Lau Heung turned to face Yuen Tsui Wan, who was still trying to
digest the fact that his nemesis was, in fact, pretty much alive, albeit scarred.
"Bat Prince," Chor Lau Heung greeted his opponent,
"Shall we have Round Two?"
Yuen Tsui Wan looked around to see all fighters surrounding him.
Master Yuen Hung, Master Dik Chan and Sit Yi Yan gasped in a happy surprise to
see Chor Lau Heung alive, while the others were practically cheering him. Tim
Yi almost ran towards her adopted brother had Wu Tit Fa not prevented her.
After all, their enemy was still alive, and they shouldn't let their guards
down.
"So many of you..." Tsui Wan smirked. "Who's to say
that they're not going to attack me after I'm done with you?"
"Three things," Lingering Fragrance replied immediately.
"One: the Emperor gave his words that I will duel with you alone. Two: I
also want to fight you alone. Three: I will win this round, hence you're never
going to be done with me."
Tsui Wan had to laugh. "I kicked you off the cliff the last
time. Who's to say I won't kill you this time?"
"I gravely injured you the last time too," Chor Lau
Heung smirked. "As for the fall, let's just say I learned from my mistakes
and picked myself up. It won't happen again."
"So sure of yourself!"
"As I said before," Lingering Fragrance smiled and
lifted the Jade Sword to a stance. "Round Two."
Then deathly silence descended upon the entire courtyard for a
good few minutes. Then a wolf howled in the distance as the wind blew slightly.
Then, no one knew who opened attack first, but both mortal enemies started
charging and attacking each other. It was the valley duel all over again with
both fighters slashing and parrying their swords at an alarming speed, such
that the audience only saw flashes of light as the swords clashed. Yuen Tsui
Wan was indeed a skilful fighter. Prior to the duel at the valley, Chor Lau
Heung often wondered if he truly could defeat the Bat Prince. That day at the
valley, he learned that he actually could. He actually could even kill his
opponent if he wanted to. That day, it was his hesitance in finishing off Tsui
Wan that gave the Bat Prince the nanosecond chance to block his attack and kick
him off the cliff. Lingering Fragrance had been pondering about that for the
last few weeks during his recovery from the fall until he came to terms with
the fact that some vermin do need to be eliminated from the world for peace to
reign.
Hence the difference between the valley fight and tonight's fight.
Chor Lau Heung didn't hold back. His attacks were lethal and administered in a
non-forgiving, almost ruthless way. Whenever he had to dodge Tsui Wan's
counterattacks, he pirouetted or back flipped swiftly but then he also wasted
no time to return to the fight. His feet were like springs that catapulted his
body wherever he wanted to go.
There was unmistakable anger and cry for justice in Lau Heung's
attacks too. Not just due to Tsui Wan's barely veiled desire towards Siu Ching
(Chor Lau Heung was actually there to see Yuen Tsui Wan touting the girls
inside Siu Ching's chamber), but also because of what happened to Kam Ling Chi.
Lau Heung had been feeling guilty about what happened to the Kams and how he
and Wu Tit Fa actually used Ling Chi's unwavering allegiance towards Yuen Tsui
Wan. Hence, no matter what the girl did to him, he took barely any offence.
After his recovery, Lau Heung was passing by a wilderness a few days ago in the
rain en route the Palace when he encountered a farmer, pale and shaken. The
farmer just took a shelter in a nearby cave when he found a dead body. A girl,
to be precise. When Lingering Fragrance inspected the body, he was shocked to
see it was Kam Ling Chi's. The girl was stabbed with a poisonous weapon,
possibly less than two days prior. Although he realised that he now urgently
needed to go back to the Palace, Lau Heung took time to properly bury Kam Ling
Chi's body and give her the respect due.
And now, that anger fuelled him to press charges. He blocked a
perfectly camouflaged attack from Tsui Wan, in which the latter somersaulted
towards him but then changed direction mid-air and pirouetted to the left as he
swung the Viper Sword towards the King of Thieves; an attacking move only Yuen
Tsui Wan could execute and only Chor Lau Heung could parry. That evasion irked Tsui Wan, such
that the Bat Prince slashed his sword ungallantly and screamed, "Why don't
you just die?!", to which Lingering Fragrance volleyed with, "Why did
you have to kill Miss Kam?!" He cartwheeled to evade the Viper Sword, then
rolled into a small ball and slashed low, injuring Tsui Wan's left leg.
"That's for Miss Kam!" Lau Heung declared. He then delivered a
perfect roundhouse kick at his enemy's chest such that the latter spurt blood
as he fell hard to the ground. "And that's for your indecent desires
towards Siu Ching!" Chor Lau Heung said as he pressed the Jade Sword on
Tsui Wan's throat. "And you lose." He kicked the Viper Sword away
towards Sit Yi Yan, the rightful owner of the sword who swiftly caught the
sword.
The few seconds silence was followed by cheers from all over the
courtyard. Siu Ching ran towards her lover as the Crown Prince followed suit.
Yet, true to his vigilant nature, Chor Lau Heung held his hand. "Your
Highnesses, please remain where you are, the danger isn't over." Sit Yi
Yan nodded to his Royal in-laws. "Majesties, please stay put," the
former leader of the Bloody Palm Sect agreed. "We need to secure this
criminal first before we celebrate this."
"Secure me?!" Tsui Wan spatted. "You think you can
detain me?"
"I just did," came the calm reply of Chor Lau Heung, his
hand still firmly held the Jade Sword against Tsui Wan's neck. "And
although I'm so tempted to finish you myself, I need to defer to His Majesty's
decision on this." He turned to face the Emperor, who did look pensive.
"You're a criminal, Yuen Tsui Wan, through and through. We
need to carefully consider what to do with you, now that Chor tai-hap has
apprehended you. General," the Emperor addressed one of his generals who
had always been with him throughout the night attack. "Secure the criminal
for a future trial."
"Yes, Majesty," the general nodded. He proceeded to
secure Tsui Wan with the assistance of some soldiers. Yet, perhaps mere mortals
were always a scion in demigods play. 'Mere mortals' like the soldiers were no
match for a practical demigod like Yuen Tsui Wan. The Bat Prince remained very
calm when two soldiers took over from Chor Lau Heung with their own swords
against the former's neck. However, the chi required to hold the sword firmly
just wasn't there anymore as Lau Heung released his hold. Yuen Tsui Wan
effortlessly dismantled and killed the two soldiers and injured the general
before launching himself at Lingering Fragrance's retreating back. Yet, well
aware of this possibility, Lau Heung whirled to the left and launched an attack
towards Tsui Wan's unguarded left side. The attack wasn't meant as a killing
attack, but since Chor Lau Heung was ready this time to make that call, it came
out very forceful. The Jade Sword was buried deep within his enemy's side
through his abdomen, such that when Lingering Fragrance pulled it out, blood
splashed everywhere. The Bat Prince gasped and, after what seemed to be a long
time for the people at the courtyard, fell on the ground with a thud.
"Well, that's for my mother, if you ask me," whispered
the Crown Prince after Master Yuen Hung pronounced Yuen Tsui Wan dead.
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"Let me help you with the rope," offered the ever kind
So Yung Yung to Wah Jan Jan, who grinned and thanked her.
"You're almost late. Thought you changed your mind."
Jan Jan turned to see Song Siu Ching coming out into the Fragrant
Boat front deck, Chor Lau Heung walking seconds behind her. Jan Jan smiled.
"It wasn't difficult to convince my sister that I'd like to leave Hua
Shan, but I have to make sure my tasks there were properly transferred to other
girls."
"Well, glad you can make it in time. We're not sure whether
to wait or just leave you a message of our next stop," Chor Lau Heung
said, then he gestured to the other girls. "Yung Yung is showing you how
to do the roping, I take it? If you still have questions, just come ask me
about it."
"Or to me," added Siu Ching. "I've got the hang of
it these days."
Chor Lau Heung smiled lovingly at her before agreeing, "She
actually has."
Princess Wing Ching had lived with him and the three girls onboard
of the Fragrant Boat since the passing week. Following Yuen Tsui Wan's death a
few weeks ago, Chor Lau Heung had gathered with others (except for the Emperor,
who was too tired to stay awake to listen to his story) inside Siu Ching's old
chamber. He had patiently explained what happened after the fall during the
valley duel. He did fall into the valley, hit a rock and fainted as his body
drowned in the river. Yet, Heaven was very kind, for a few miles down the
river, he was actually saved by a fisherman who was going to depart for a few
days' journey to the open sea. Since the weather was fine, the fisherman didn't
cancel his trip. Instead, he took Lingering Fragrance into his boat and nursed
him on-board until he woke up two days later. That was why no one found out
about this fisherman saving the King of Thieves, for when the army and the
Beggar Clan were combing down the river, he was actually at sea. After five
days offshore, the fisherman returned with the wanderer to his hut by the
river. At that time, Chor Lau Heung already recovered enough to return to the
Capital if he wanted to. Yet, he wanted to fully recover first, hence he went
to Yat Dim Hung's monastery, where the monk gave him the space to fully
recover.
"But we asked Yat Dim Hung's help to locate you, or at least
pay attention to any news," Song Siu Ching had been confused. She didn't
come to the monastery herself, but Tim Yi did, and she would tell if she had
met Chor tai-gor there. "He said he was sorry for what happened, and he'd
keep us updated if he heard anything."
"Tim Yi came before I came there," Chor Lau Heung had
looked briefly at his youngest adopted sister. "Even if she came when I
was there, I already specifically asked Dim Hung not to tell anyone," Lau
Heung added apologetically. "I'm sorry, I understand it had been a very
rough few weeks for you all...but I thought I'd give a false illusion to Yuen
Tsui Wan that I was already dead so he'd lower his guard." He addressed
this specifically to Siu Ching by holding her hands in front of everyone.
"I'm truly sorry."
Siu Ching thought of this for a moment before reaching the
conclusion that the deception was indeed needed, though it caused her and
others pain. She shook her head and said that he did it for the greater good.
He smiled, knowing she had forgiven her for keeping her in the dark. They then
chatted even until others had retired to bed. Chor Lau Heung told the Princess
everything that happened, including that he got the scar from the fall. He also
told her how much he missed her.
"I have been observing you for a few days, Siu Ching... As
soon as I finished burying Miss Kam, I came here. I was so worried that Yuen
Tsui Wan got here first, but apparently, he was also doing his own observations.
I observed him observing you guys. I've decided to leap into action as soon as
he did something, but for a good few days he did nothing but watching you all
from afar. Then after he left, I would come closer to your room, observing you
sleeping... Or crying, or both. Once, I actually fixed your blanket when it
fell off the floor. I wished I could hug you that night, but you'd be awake,
and it might attract Tsui Wan too. So I just caressed your face and left
again..."
Listening to that, Siu Ching caressed Chor tai-gor's scar. He
closed his eyes to immerse himself in her touches. He then opened his eyes
again and, after a pause, told her what any girl would want to hear from her
lover.
"Siu Ching, I'd like to take you back to my boat to live with
me. I'd like to eventually marry you, if that life suits you. I know -" he
immediately added as he saw her eyes flickered, "I know you want me to
live in the palace, but if that's okay with you, I'd like to take you home to
the boat with me instead."
"Chor tai-gor..."
"I hope I'm not asking too much of you. I understand i have
made you doing an involuntary sacrifice by keeping you in the dark about my
survival... Such that I actually don't feel I have the rights to ask you to
leave the Palace. But my month away from you, pretending to be dead, had taught
me how important you were for me. I'd like to live my life with you. It's just,
I still can't see myself as a Palace dweller. Hence..."
He ran out of words, thus he turned away, looking at the dawning
sky. He couldn't bear seeing disagreement in her eyes.
"Chor tai-gor..."
Lingering Fragrance then decided to face his fears. Clenching his jaws, he turned
again to face her. "I'm sorry, I -" Yet, to his surprise, it wasn't
disagreement that he saw in her eyes. It was love, and acceptance.
"Chor tai-gor, my month without you had taught me how much
you truly meant to me. Once I actually made a vow, that if you return to me,
I'd leave the Palace if you want me to. The Palace without you isn't an
interesting place anyway for me." She caressed his scar again.
"So, as soon as Father wakes up tomorrow, you can ask his permission to take me away. I'm sure he'd say
yes."
And then she smiled. The first smile she had in a month. He smiled
too, for he had missed her smile so much. He then kissed her and let her rest
her lovely head on his shoulder as they watched the sunrise.
That was two weeks ago. Now, the girl he loved was here with him
in his boat. Sharing her life with him. Lingering Fragrance had promise the
Emperor that they'd inform him of his wedding with Siu Ching, whenever it
happened, for they were not in a hurry for that. The Emperor himself, he'd just
got good news that Sit Yan, the Crown Princess, was expecting a baby, so His
Majesty now was quite busy with that news.
Now, Chor Lau Heung observed with glee how Siu Ching was teaching
Jan Jan about the ropes. He looked at the sky and decided the wind was perfect
for their journey. As Jan Jan entered the chamber with Tim Yi, Hung Chao and
Yung Yung, he approached Siu Ching. The girl was peacefully looking at the
direction of the Capital.
"You’re missing
home?" He gently asked as he embraced her from behind. She smiled and
shook her head.
"No, I'm just thinking of Father, and how happy he is now
with his incoming grand child. I'm happy for him. As for home," she turned
to face her love. "...this is my home now."
"It is indeed." Chor Lau Heung smiled, landed a short
kiss at her cherry lips, and asked, "Now, Princess, shall we sail away
now?"
-FIN-
Author’s note:
Not a lot, other than I’ve recently changed
writing ‘Brother Chor’ as ‘Chor tai-gor’ in Cantonese instead of ‘Chor tai-ko’,
although the pronunciation is the same. Courtesy of some discussions with Hong
Kong friends. I suppose, old spellings could be writing ‘elder brother’ as
‘tai-ko’ instead of ‘tai-gor’? Cos I did find a book or two using the former
instead of the latter. Oh, and ‘tai-hap’ is how people addressed a ‘warrior’ or
hero or fighter during those ancient days.
9 comments:
I like this story very much and the the conflict in how Siu Ching reacts to Chor Lau Heung. This is a wonderful post and I hope you post more stories about them Icha!
Thanks a lot, Tamuyen, for the review! Also my apologies for the late posting of your comment; I was sightseeing yesterday and didn't check emails. Re: SC's conflicting reaction, I actually had a slightly different ending to this story, originally, to the same effect of happy ending. But I originally wrote SC as being more conflicted to CLH's return for she felt a bit left behind for being kept in the dark about his survival. Then that ending took too long, hence I opted for this ending instead.
Do you have any ideas for fanfiction you'd like me to write for you? Another reader asked me to write about the first time SC met CLH, and I wrote that for her. Another reader also said she liked reading an action-packed story that showed CLH's agility, hence I wrote "Tough Love" for her. Just let me know.
Thank you then! I was always wondering what would happen if Yat Dim Hong actually took Siu Ching to the Bat Palace and he traded her for his news about who killed his wife and didn't bother for Siu Ching. Then I would think that she would be separated from Chor for a long time until episode 30 when try were all rescued from the Palace. What would Chor do? Would he rescue them, what would his initial reaction be when he sees Siu Ching again? Would she escape? I'm wondering if you could write a fanfictoon of that scene for me if you can! I love your writing! Thank you Icha!
Oh man... CLH would go nuts if he learned that Fell Cut delivered SC for the Bats! But 12-13 episodes are simply too long for CLH without SC, so I need to think the logics... It's a very doable fan fiction tho, but since I don't see SC as a damsel in distress (she did escape from dire situations several times without CLH's help), so I'm leaning towards SC being able to escape.
Lemme think of it and get back to you in 10-14 days or so. It's doable. I just have some MVs down the pipeline that I want to make before I Do my next trip this Feb. Will contact you once it's done! ^_^
That's a great idea! I don't want to drag the story too much to make it tiring for you, I just want to see how a story comes out from your perspective! I definitely think Siu Ching would escape at around episode 25 where everybody started to get captured. I wondered if she rescued everyone. Don't worry I'm not in a rush, I would like to see your other creations as well Icha!
Thanks for the ideas, Tamuyen! Will see what SC decides to do in the fanfic. Oftentimes, I found CLH and SSC decided what to do and where to steer the story, instead of I'm being in charge...
And thanks for the "creation" note... I often felt like procrastinating with the fanfics, MVs and other MB posts... But since they make friends like you happy, I might need to consider them as creative outlets instead of procrastination, then! ^_^
Haha! I always procrastinate too Icha so you are not alone! Take your time on things and I will support you on your blogs! Thanks for taking your one to do these!
No worries!
...Oh, look! I should be sleeping but I just posted a new CLH MV! Not a romantic one, more like spy/detective theme due to the BBC Spooks music! Hope you like it, tho! Nite nite! (it's past midnight at my place in AU now...)
Sayang sekali Aku baru membaca ya icha
Aku bahkan hampir menangis saat membaca bagian saat dimana siu ching menangis karena tuan yuen hung mengatakan CLH benar benar sudah meninggal
Ya Tuhan meski perasaan ku terbiasa dalam cerita ini
Sea dainya ini yang terjadi dalam cerita aslinya benar benar sangat menyenangkan melihat betapa mereka sangat mencintai satu sama lain
Terimakasih icha untuk dan fic nya
Febri
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